I stare at the hooded figures winding the gears and completing their tests on my replicated body. I see no reason since I can see their faces hovering godly above. Whatever gave them comfort, I guess.
Scattered reports label them Nobodies, the leftover trash, sans a heart. They tell me their existence is coloured gray.
As if they understand the meaning.
They have a name, a body all their own. A name, though altered, still theirs. Even a heart, though taken, was once theirs.
I look at this mimicked body, feel this cloned heartbeat, and choke in this ashen void.
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KHL: Kingdom Hearts Literatures
I wrote this drabble while my brother was playing hockey. The Nobodies are drawn in a void of grey -- the in-between black and white, of light and darkness. But isn't the abyss better suited to Repliku? The one who has nothing? The drabble situates Repliku as knowing he is a creation, waiting for Vexen and Zexion to fix his body. I like the concept, even if it deviates a bit from the game. Kingdom Hearts Literatures ©  Ashen © Me Kingdom Hearts Literatures @ Riku-of-Darkness. Repliku: Gray ~~~ Zexion == Dk. Blue [link] Riku == Silver [link] Riku == Black [link] Repliku == Aquamarine [link] Ansem/Xehanort == Gold [link] Sora == Blue [link] Riku == Yellow [link] Lexaeus == Sand [link] Marluxia == Pink [link] Saïx == Pale Yellow [link] Xemnas == Gray [link] Repliku == Black [link] Ebony Repliku/Ivory Riku == [link] / [link] Kairi == White [link] Naminé == Ecru [link] Xigbar == Violet [link] Vexen == Ice Blue [link] Demyx == Blue [link] Comments
 I like how you did this. I can't really describe exactly what it was that I enjoyed the most, but I liked the whole feel of it. Good job.
Thank you. This one gave me some trouble because it can easily be extended. I'm really happy with the condensed outcome though.
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