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Bloody Challenge

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Raigen could taste his own blood, a hot, salty mixture that burned his tongue. Baring his teeth in a wide grin, he displayed his approval. He liked that taste; it told him his opponent would not disappoint. ‘Good,’ he thought, knuckling at the red, stinging haze in his left eye. ‘I won’t lose to you, Raykin!

Sparing a glance over his shoulder, Raigen saw Myriil collapsed on the ground again, her energy spent on giving him this chance. He would not waste it, not after what Drayken had done. A cough expelled blood into the twilight, spraying the rusted earth. As Raigen pulled out of his slouch, he could feel the curse in his body awaken: bones knitted, vessels fused, skin grafted; none of it felt pleasant—or warm like Myriil’s gentle hands—but he was used to such nuisances, twisted the inconvenience into more motivation to pay the assailant back. His neck cracked, the muscles loosened, and Raigen took a fighting stance. His bulky frame seemed larger in the darkening eve; sunlight  snuck past the trees and glared off his glasses, spelling his challenge in bright orange.

Drayken scoffed, drawing his sword to the thickened air, eyes trained solely on Raigen, his burden, his target. He had not anticipated this bounty to be such trouble but was past seeing Raigen as a paycheque. Now it was personal, a fight he had no intention of losing. At his left, Drayken whirled the longsword about, casting his reply in deadly silver. ‘I was tired of holding back anyways…
Amg, I can't believe how late this is! ;A; I'm so sorry, Bob-san!

It's been a long time since I've worked on Bloody Lightning; I've been trying but my mind is distracted with so many things. I hope to do more soon. :heart:
Anyways! Happy Birthday, =Bob-Raigen! I'm sorry this is being posted late; got hit with two freelance jobs on Tuesday. And, I'm sorry it's so short; I haven't got to the fight in the main story yet, so I don't want to spoil too much. lol This will be a bloody battle indeed. I think it's an official rivalry now, Drayken and Raigen. Woo! XD;;

:party: I hope you had a good birthday! I miss you; seems you've been busy too~
:huggle:

Drakyen, Myriil © Me
Bloody Raigen © =Bob-Raigen
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woooah thanksss sooo muuuch :iconhappytearsplz:

t-the second paragraph is filled with super ultra awesome detailed description of Raigen's anger and turning the bloody mode on :wow: i could never express it with such awesome chosen lines for that scene :iconawwwplz: thank you sooooo muuch :iconarigatouplz:
lol i loled when i think of the twisted version....

Raigen could taste his own blood, a hot, salty mixture that burned his tongue. Baring his teeth in a wide grin, he displayed his approval. He liked that taste; so he told his opponent.... " Damn it's quite delicious, you got any bread ? it'll be great  !
Drayken : ...why dont you just eat up yourself then ,moron ? ................oh wait is it that delicious ?

Myriil : w-w-w-what's going on !? stop with this twisted version ! :iconrejectedplz:

Drayken : oh please dont imagine me eating it...i wont be so stupid---who knows his blood will cause the consumer turns into moron as well ? if it's that delicious, maybe i'll kill him for sale !

Raigen : How dare you ! Mine's mine !!

Myriil : ....
*some dwarves are vomiting behind her,unable to endure the horrible thing they've heard :rofl:


omgaga hahahahahha :iconmonkeylaughplz: that was super error version